tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post1453312950375837634..comments2023-04-19T18:13:30.080+01:00Comments on I Am On My Way: 31 Days to Become a Better Writer - Day 4Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00052964225169835973noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-41601391825240619972012-03-09T20:52:04.000+00:002012-03-09T20:52:04.000+00:00Thanks Beth! I'm hoping to get some rest tomor...Thanks Beth! I'm hoping to get some rest tomorrow. Had a busy day today too.C.C. @ I'm On My Wayhttp://www.thealmons.com/ccblognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-44502859067730618332012-03-09T20:19:00.000+00:002012-03-09T20:19:00.000+00:00I think you did that really well! Hope you're ...I think you did that really well! Hope you're feeling better!Bethnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-42225188362777540952012-03-10T19:59:44.000+00:002012-03-10T19:59:44.000+00:00Hey C.c.....Great topic! How I miss those old tim...Hey C.c.....Great topic! How I miss those old times with friends as well.<br>My only comment would be that I was a little confused as it seemed that there was more than one tense in the paragraphs. For example in the Present paragraph you wrote about the past when remembering what the friends use to do together. Also, the future was mentioned when you wrote I cannot wait to sit together?..so even though the dinner is in the present as in today, it's not right now. Know what I mean? What do u think?Pattinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-39260316677256120982012-03-11T09:33:28.000+00:002012-03-11T09:33:28.000+00:00I figured you did...unfortunately I'm not sure...I figured you did...unfortunately I'm not sure what u do, or maybe it's fine ;)Pattinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-75549699333591095832012-03-11T15:41:06.000+00:002012-03-11T15:41:06.000+00:00Very true! :)Very true! :)C.C. @ I'm On My Wayhttp://www.thealmons.com/ccblognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-72632238759427857202012-03-11T06:51:02.000+00:002012-03-11T06:51:02.000+00:00That was my struggle Patti because I wanted to tal...That was my struggle Patti because I wanted to talk about what had formed our friendship while still looking at the tenses. Hmmm....C.C. @ I'm On My Wayhttp://www.thealmons.com/ccblognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-9929226539804939672012-03-11T14:01:59.000+00:002012-03-11T14:01:59.000+00:00Not to mention that people wouldn't even notic...Not to mention that people wouldn't even notice if they weren't aware of the assignment!Pattinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2884921014580309934.post-12850739535850235282012-03-11T13:34:22.000+00:002012-03-11T13:34:22.000+00:00LOL! Thankfully it's not a school assignment a...LOL! Thankfully it's not a school assignment and we're not getting graded Patti or else I would be really stressing out about now. :DC.C. @ I'm On My Wayhttp://www.thealmons.com/ccblognoreply@blogger.com